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Absence

You're not here,
a smile can not reach you anymore
and I feel like a puzzle piece that lost his puzzle

You're not here,
you are far away of  my apprehensive and gentle touch
and I feel as if delicate hands had dug a black hole in my chest
I feel as if the stars were seeping through it

You're not here,
you no longer can hear my sweet and sincere words
and I feel as if my heart had been muted

You're not here,
so I feel unnecessary
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Fast poetry
(written on a Saturday morning)
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:iconneshvacena:
Mood: Wow! ~neshvacena Sep 26, 2012  Hobbyist Photographer
:) :clap:
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~hamletprimeiro Sep 26, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
It's so good that you liked. Thank you. :hug:
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~neshvacena Sep 27, 2012  Hobbyist Photographer
:hug:
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:iconchanellerenee:
A very moving poem. You wrote this very well. My favorite sentence is line 3.
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~hamletprimeiro Sep 22, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
Thank you very much.
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